This is a high-scoring sample answer for the following Cambridge B2 First writing Part 1 essay question: Some people say that young people can only entertain themselves in front of a screen. What do you think? Collocations about the technology can be found here. Below, also, is a list of less common vocabulary with definitions. Read the sample answer, then send me your essay in the comments. I will give you a quick score and also some comments if I have time. Why not start today?
B2 First Part 1 Essay Sample Answer
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.
In your English class you have been talking about modern entertainment. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay. Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Some people say that young people can only entertain themselves in front of a screen. What do you think?
Notes
Write about:
- why screen entertainment is so popular
- books and reading
- (your own idea)
Some say that screens are the only way that youngsters can entertain themselves. Although I understand this opinion, I completely disagree with it.
With screens being an integral part of the current technological revolution, it is easy for young people to be able to use them well. There are several way to be entertained using sreens, from video games to smartphones to computers, but that is not a reason to ignore other, more traditional ways.
Reading is one of these ways and offers readers a different experience. For many it gives them more peace and quiet than any electronic device can. Admitedly, there are e-readers, but for a significant number of people feeling a real book, being able to make notes and being able to display a collection in a bookcase is more important.
Furthermore, young people are extremely aware of what is healthy or unhealthy. Paying attention to diet and exercise is considered essential to modern day life, so sports and other energetic passtimes are popular with this age group.
In conclusion, screen entertainment is accepted as a part of life today, but young people are quite able to entertain themselves in a variety of different ways too.
Remember to post your essay in the comments at the bottom of this page so I can give you a score!
Less Common Vocabulary for B2 First Writing
integral – necessary to make a whole complete; essential or fundamental
ignore – refuse to take notice of or acknowledge, disregard intentionally
Even more vocabulary on technology is available here.
Remember to post your essay in the comments at the bottom of this page so I can give you a score!
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